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Iron in the Blood: Rottich’s Trial

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Introduction
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Rottich grits his teeth, sweat stinging his eyes as he lunges at the battered training dummy in the barracks yard. The cracked earth beneath his boots puffs up clouds of red dust with every strike. Colonel Quache’s shadow looms close by, arms folded, eyes sharp.

“Pathetic. Again!”

Quache’s voice cracks like a whip, making a squad of older trainees snicker from the sidelines. Rottich’s monkey tail twitches in irritation, but he draws a shaky breath, resets his stance, and swings harder. His scouter chirps faintly, registering the low power output. Quache steps in, grabbing Rottich’s shoulder roughly.

“You call that a punch? If you can’t break this, you’re not fit to wear that armor.”

The older Saiyan shoves him back. Rottich stumbles but stays upright, feeling every eye on him. The afternoon sun beats down, the metallic scent of blood and sweat thick in the air. Rottich sizes up the dummy, fists clenched, the ache in his arm competing with the fire in his chest.

Rottich now present
Quache now present
Scene 1
Rottich

"Hah! Hah! Hah!"

I howl out, my high-pitched, prepubescent voice gasping as I keep throwing punch after punch against the nearby dummy. Day in, day out, it was brutal training. The Colonel although had many soldiers to train, he was particularly rough on me.

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Rottich's fists struck the worn synthetic hide of the dummy with a dull thud, his lungs burning with each ragged breath. He refused to break his rhythm, even as exhaustion radiated through his limbs. Nearby, Colonel Quache loomed, his gaze a cold, unyielding weight that pressed harder than the desert heat.

Quache

I step forward, sending the dummy sprawling with a heavy boot.

"Enough. Your form is sloppy and your spirit is soft. If you truly wish to honor your bloodline, stop playing at war. I am increasing your gravity weight tonight. If you cannot survive it, you are useless to me."

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The training yard fell into a heavy, suffocating silence. Rottich felt the cold bite of the command, the promise of the crushing gravity chamber looming over his evening. He remained frozen for a heartbeat, his chest heaving, while the red dust settled slowly around his boots. The shadow of the Colonel remained fixed upon him.

Zorn now present
Zorn

I cross my arms, noting the hardening of his eyes, a flicker of defiance sparking within.

"Good. That look is the only thing keeping you from being discarded today. Report to the gravity deck in ten minutes. If you collapse before the cycle ends, you will regret ever being born a Saiyan."

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Rottich

I spit out some bile, my eyes narrowing in a look of defiance, as I scowl out.

"I'll show you... I'll show all of you! Especially you, Colonel!"

It was no mistaking it: I'm a Saiyan runt, a genuine whelp. Many no doubt asked Quache why the hell I was here and not suckling my mother's bosom or whatnot. No doubt he knew there was potential in me -- after all, he's half the reason I exist, unbeknownst to anyone but himself.

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Rottich wiped a smear of bitter bile from his chin, his small frame trembling with exhaustion and raw, unfiltered hatred. He fixed his gaze on the towering Colonel Quache, eyes burning with jagged defiance.

"I'll show you. I'll show all of you! Especially you, Colonel!"

The training yard fell silent, the surrounding trainees holding their breath at his outburst.

Quache

I stalk toward him, my boots crunching on the dry earth. Towering over him, I grip the back of his neck so tightly his teeth rattle.

"Defiance is a luxury for those who can back it up. You have earned a lesson in silence today, boy."

I drag him toward the gravity deck.

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The iron grip on his neck blurred the world into swirls of red dust and jagged shadows as Rottich was dragged toward the heavy, reinforced door of the gravity deck. Zorn stepped forward, his hand resting near his scouter, eyes cold and detached as he watched the raw display of authority.

Brolen now present
Zorn

I remain motionless, arms crossed, observing Quache drag the whelp toward the threshold.

"A fine example, Colonel. Let us see if this defiance survives the pressure. If he breaks, he is merely waste to be swept away. If he adapts, he might finally be worth the oxygen he consumes."

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The heavy metal door of the gravity deck groaned as it slid open, revealing a chamber bathed in sterile, flickering light. Quache shoved Rottich into the center of the room. The internal mechanisms began to whine as the artificial weight started its relentless climb. Guard Brolen stood by the console, his hand hovering over the controls, his expression one of bored indifference.

Zorn now gone
Scene 3
Rottich

I stood ready to face the gravity, and maybe this was a punishment, but I was not going to let the colonel break me. I stood, wiping the sweat off my forehead, and readying a stance in defiance of him trying to break me.

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Rottich pressed his feet firmly against the cold metal floor. He wiped a slick of sweat and dust from his brow, fingers trembling just enough to betray his strain. Drawing a deep, ragged breath, he fixed his gaze ahead and settled into a rigid fighting stance.

"I am still standing,"

he muttered, defiance radiating from his small, tense frame as the room began to hum with intensifying pressure. Brolen adjusted a dial on the console, his face unreadable while the floor plates groaned beneath the growing weight.

Quache

I narrow my eyes, studying his muscles as they strain beneath the invisible, crushing weight. He refuses to buckle; a flicker of something like true grit surfaces.

"Brolen, double the intensity. If he wants to stand, let him earn the right to breathe under the crushing reality of his own inadequacy."

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The gravity surged without warning, a leaden shroud pressing down with brutal force. Rottich’s knees buckled, his boots slipping slightly on the slick metal floor. Brolen’s fingers moved over the controls, his face unreadable, as the room’s metallic whine climbed to a sharp, piercing crescendo.

Brolen

I watch the boy struggle, my hand steady on the dial. The metal groans, mirroring his faltering stance.

"Gravity does not negotiate, little one,"

I growl, my voice barely audible over the mechanical whine. I twist the control further, forcing the deck to its maximum limit.

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The floor plates shrieked, metal groaning beneath the sudden, crushing weight. Rottich dropped to one knee, palms slamming against the grating to keep his face from smashing into the floor. The air thickened, stagnant and suffocating, pressing on his lungs like a solid force. Brolen stared down, his face unreadable as the chamber lights flickered and dimmed, leaving only the dull red glow of the power monitors. Above, the hum of the gravity generators swelled into a deafening roar, shaking him to the marrow.

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Rottich

"HWAH!"

I howl out in pain as the gravity doubles... Triples... Quadruples... Quintuples. I fell to a knee, my hand catching myself. No doubt though: Most Saiyan children my age would have been crushed, but not me. It didn't stop me from tearing up, though.

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Rottich crumpled beneath the relentless weight, his knuckles bone-white against the cold, trembling floor. The air in his lungs thickened, heavy as molten lead. Tears stung his eyes, carving clean paths through the grime on his face, yet he growled,

"HWAH!"

and forced his spine upright, battling the oppressive force determined to crush him.

Quache

I step closer, my shadow engulfing his prone form.

"You cling to life like a parasite, Rottich. Finally, some steel in your spine."

I reach down, gripping his hair to force his gaze upward.

"Keep that fire. If you survive this night, you might actually be worth the training."

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Rottich’s grip on the grating tightened, his knuckles raw and white against the cold metal. The air thinned, trembling with the high-pitched drone of the straining gravity emitters. Behind the console, Brolen shifted his stance, eyes fixed on the fluctuating power levels as the chamber floor began to warp beneath the immense, concentrated force.

Brolen

I lean heavily against the console, eyes narrowing as the floor plates begin to buckle.

"The structure is failing, Colonel. If he survives the next surge, the room itself will collapse. Shall I vent the pressure, or let the metal become his tomb?"

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Rottich gritted his teeth, muscles in his neck corded and pulsing with effort as the room groaned in protest. The metal floor buckled upward, jagged sparks flying from failing conduits. Silence hung heavy, broken only by the rhythmic, tortured shrieking of the pressurized walls as they neared their breaking point.

Scene 5
Rottich

I did begin to feel a fire build up inside me. Tears still streaking down my face, I began to slowly stand. No doubt my power level was unbelievable for my age... 7,000.

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A fierce, golden heat surged from Rottich’s core, shattering the crushing grip of the artificial gravity. His small body trembled violently as power exploded within him. Through tear-filled eyes, he faced the warping walls and planted his feet. His aura sparked wildly, clashing with the failing systems. Quache and Brolen recoiled, their scouters wailing in a frantic, unrelenting shriek as the readings soared to an impossible seven thousand.

Quache

I stagger back, raising my arm to shield my eyes from the blinding radiance.

"Impossible,"

I snarl, my voice cracking with disbelief as the scouter on my ear explodes from the feedback. I glare at the boy, chest heaving, feeling the very foundation of my command tremble beneath his feet.

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The chamber groaned, its structure straining under the overwhelming surge. Brolen stood motionless behind the console, hands hovering over the sparking controls as the lights flickered violently between harsh red and blinding white. Static crackled in the air, raising the fine hairs on his arms. He stared at the display, jaw slack, while power levels climbed relentlessly, the warning sirens wailing in a discordant chorus.

Brolen

I step away from the dying console, my boots crunching on shattered glass. I draw my sidearm, leveling it at the boy.

"The facility is compromised, Colonel. This creature is no longer a trainee, but a liability that must be erased before the structure collapses entirely."

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Rottich stood amid swirling debris, his aura casting long, flickering shadows on the buckling walls. The air thickened with the sharp scent of ozone and burning circuitry. Brolen’s weapon hummed sharply, cutting through the low, guttural roar of the failing gravity chamber. Quache stood frozen, eyes locked on the boy, his hand moving instinctively toward the hilt of his blade.